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Brock's avatar

Really can't wait to see if they fall in love. Bc they really do like each other, the girls are just there cover up

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Hi Brock, I love your comment on the story! Yes, there is genuine attraction—and love—between them, but how far will that take them? I'm working on the next parts now, and I hope you'll enjoy what's coming up. :)

All the best,

Chris

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DutchGay's avatar

This is an amazing story so far.

You’re a crazy talented writer!

I don’t think I’ve ever been rock hard for so long while reading! 🥹

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Wow!! Thaaaank you! That is so kind of you - I truly appreciate it. And keeping you rock hard is what I aim for :)

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Brock's avatar

That's hot!!

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Mike Miedzinski's avatar

I have enjoyed all the chapters so far, immensely erotic both at the beach house and on the beach. Can't wait to see what transpires after oysters and wine. 😀😀

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

I’m so happy you’re following their adventure, Mike! That means a lot.

And yes — there will definitely be more… let’s just say the oysters and wine are appetizers, for sure

😏

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Guya by Zayq 🌈🍆's avatar

Loved the vibe of your story, thankyou for posting. The relationship is developing beautifully x

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Wow - thank you Zayq! That means a lot to me. And now I've discovered your writing as well.

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Mike Miedzinski's avatar

There was so much heat at the beach house and then the late night on the beach itself. The love between Mats and Erik, finally out for them to see, let's hope it continues to grow and shine.

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

I love your energy! Yes, there is a strong bond between the two. Let’s see what happens with it :)

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MikeB's avatar

The newest chapter is really, really hot and sexy! Finally the guys get it on!

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Glad you like it Mike! Yes - the boys are getting on nicely, who knows what they are up to next? :)

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Dalt's avatar

I kept thinking the girls would come in from the beach and everything would come crashing down. Glad that didn't happen.

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Well, the story isn’t over yet—anything can happen. :)

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MikeB's avatar

Definitely heating up at the beach house…

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Yup. They finally get on with it. They are deepening their relationship, but what happens next? :)

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MikeB's avatar

What a great start!

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Chris - a Big Dreamer's avatar

Thanks!! 😍

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